Image Credit: saUsan MaChari
Alaina watches as angry waves crash in the distance, their usual emerald color replaced with steel grey, a reflection of the sky above. The waves crest, frothing into a moving wall of white mist that rolls toward her, creating little eddies as they break around her ankles.
You have to hurry. The storm is coming.
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Your turn. What happens next? Can you tie in the photo above?
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ReplyDeleteI've actually written something with a very similar to this on my blog!! I love the idea of a storm - so empowering and the use of pathetic fallacy can be most effective! My story is called 'Home' and inspired by the Channel Islands. If you have time, I would love if you checked it out. beautybehindapaneofglass.blogspot.co.uk/2012/06/home.html
ReplyDeleteP.s. I love the idea of 'flash fiction'! Next week when I have more time, I will join in for sure! :)